mask, ecstatic eyes
carnivore craving, nude bliss
gate to other world
submitted to Poetry Potluck, thanks Jingle for hosting 🙂
Haiku: Mask
08 Tuesday Mar 2011
Posted in Fiction, In English, Linguistics, Literature, Poetry
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i don’t get it Dag. Nice imagery, but beyond that i havent understood what you’re trying to convey here.
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it takes alot of discipline to get on to your plane and i think you did well with so few words.. try my potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/nectar-from-heaven/
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Intense imagery!
very well said in just a few words- well done 🙂
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tight.
well done.
A++
keep it up.
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