spring blossoms, warm smiles
fingers tiptoeing on skin
sweet dream whisperings
Submitted to Thursday Poets Rally Week 39:
hosted by Leo http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.blogspot.com/
and Jingle Thursday Poets Rally Week 39 (March 3-9, 2011)
Dagmar Travner
Author Blog on Arts, Literature, Philosophy
spring is beautiful…and yes sometimes it feels like it is tiptoeing, even playing hide and seek, lol
thanks
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And again, thanks 🙂
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I live in a country where there’s no difference between seasons, but reading this definitely made me feel spring and a smile creeps up. 🙂
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Thank you, Ashley 🙂
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i cnt wait till we have spring but that is gna be n the nxt 6 months..
here is my link: http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/03/your-smile.html
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Thanks, Leigh, like yours too 🙂
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the 2nd line is divine.
stunning imagery..
you rock…
have fun, let us know once you are done with 18 commeting…
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Thanks, Jingle 🙂
18 comments DONE!
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I wish I could do that. Beautiful
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thanks, though you definitely can, just stopped by your blog 😉
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Love this! Spring is always so warm and cheerful! You’ve brought it out so well
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Thank you, Sonam ♥
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awww! so warm and beautiful 🙂
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thank you 🙂
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Ahh…nice one. All the stirrings of spring :o)
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Great write! The warmth of the words just flows through. I wish I could write a haiku, but I’m just too long winded.
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Very well written Dag Dear!
It brought alongwith a lot of hope 🙂
Love xx
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Oooo beautiful images in this! Thanks for the smile. 🙂
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The promise of spring coming, beautiful whispers!
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Gave me goosebumps- fingers tiptoeing on skin. 🙂
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Great description of how the seasons can creep up on us and how the weather can feature so heavily in our romances.
Alos, it pleases me every time I see a Haiku written faithfully to its true form. So many miss the point and call all of their short poems Haiku.
There is a nice combination here of season and emotion. I would say, however, to try to make a harsher juxtaposition next time between the two.
Maybe try devoting the whole first line (in this example) to the spring and then the other two to the feeling it inspires.
Just a suggestion though. Really, a nice Haiku as is.
Keep it up!
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Very interesting and poignant imagery!
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Greetings:
Hope all is well.
Noting that you have been part of poets rally in the year of 2011,
what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!
Come join our poetry rally today if you wish to mingle and get inspired!
A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Looking forward to seeing you share.
Respect and hugs.
xoxox
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Ich habe mich gefragt, “Dag? Fuer Dagmar vielleicht?” Sie sind, auf jedem Fall, ja aus Oesterreich, ich sehe.
Anyway, nice haiku. engaging different senses– sight, hearing, touch (invoking both finders AND toes!, as well as the emotions and imagination. So much there.
Glad I got the chance to enjoy it.
My rally entry is at:
http://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2012/08/02/light-was-not-always/
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