Haiku: Motionless

04 Friday Feb 2011

Posted by Dag Travner in Fiction, In English, Literature

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haiku, longing, love, night, winter

white flakes, motionless
blue erring realities
nightly melodies

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3 thoughts on “Haiku: Motionless”

johndierckx said:

February 6, 2011 at 1:59 pm

darkness, white flakes
light overcoming darkness
He came, to set the captives free

Bless you

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- Dag Travner said:
  
  February 6, 2011 at 8:08 pm
  
  the sounds (and thoughts) of the night can be haunting sometimes – and it‘s always good to keep in mind that the sun will be rising again and bring back all the bright light of the day and the love for life…
  
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johndierckx said:

February 7, 2011 at 3:19 am

Beautiful and true.

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