träume – nachtgang durch
landschaften von andersheit
deine hand in meiner
komm! hör den herzschlag
spür meine melodie
schau meine gedanken
Übertragung ins Deutsche von Night Walk (vorhergehender Post)
Sedōka – eine japanische Gedichtform mit den max. Silben 5-7-7-5-7-7,
ähnlich dem Haiku und Tanka stellt er eine Unterordnung des Waka dar.
dreaming – night walk through
landscapes of otherness
your hand in mine
come, listen to heartbeats
feel my tune, see my thoughts
Tanka is a form of Japanese poetry, similar to Haiku, but older and consisting of max. 5-7-5-7-7 Syllables.
green mead, frail blooming
birds’ enticing melodies
when you grasped my hand
dragging me into your dreams
swift overwhelming journey
blue blooming, stormy
spring stroll, breeze of reverie
reverberant tune
spring air, clearing fog
restless strolling through blue night
sharp vision, soft dream
setting sun, moon rise
walk into a wakeful night
silenced daydreams
scent of spring, birds’ song
gentle caress, warm embrace
remote reveries
moon light, good night kiss
gentle embrace, tender joy
bittersweetest dream
spring blossoms, warm smiles
fingers tiptoeing on skin
sweet dream whisperings
Submitted to Thursday Poets Rally Week 39:
hosted by Leo http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.blogspot.com/
and Jingle Thursday Poets Rally Week 39 (March 3-9, 2011)
wintry trail, white lips
hazy kiss of vibrant dream
speechless reaching out
blurred moon, blue vision
sweetest dream in outer space
your thoughts touching mine
Dag Travner
