Haiku: Mask

Fiction, In English, Linguistics, Literature, Poetry March 8, 2011 Comments: 4

mask, ecstatic eyes
carnivore craving, nude bliss
gate to other world

submitted to Poetry Potluck, thanks Jingle for hosting :)

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4 thoughts on “Haiku: Mask”

  1. gomagoti March 9, 2011 at 11:33 am Reply

    i don’t get it Dag. Nice imagery, but beyond that i havent understood what you’re trying to convey here.

  2. fiveloaf March 9, 2011 at 3:18 pm Reply

    it takes alot of discipline to get on to your plane and i think you did well with so few words.. try my potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/nectar-from-heaven/

  3. Olivia March 11, 2011 at 6:49 pm Reply

    Intense imagery!
    very well said in just a few words- well done :)

  4. promising poets parking lot March 25, 2011 at 3:54 pm Reply

    tight.
    well done.
    A++

    keep it up.

    Welcome joining poets rally week 40,
    all submissions will be fully represented by the end of the week,
    visit me for details today.. hope to see you in..

    Cheers.
    Happy Writing..
    xx

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