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mask, ecstatic eyes
carnivore craving, nude bliss
gate to other world
submitted to Poetry Potluck, thanks Jingle for hosting
Tagged: bliss, carnival, carnivore, desire, eyes, haiku, mask, poem
i don’t get it Dag. Nice imagery, but beyond that i havent understood what you’re trying to convey here.
it takes alot of discipline to get on to your plane and i think you did well with so few words.. try my potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/nectar-from-heaven/
very well said in just a few words- well done
keep it up.
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